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Christmas Day falls on the 25th December. It is a very happy day for many people. On the 24th December, all children are excited. Usually, they are sent to bed early that night, so that their parents can get their presents ready. Young children think that Father Christmas comes down from the chimney and lands on the fireplace. So they hang up socks to put their presents into. The greedy even a pillow-case or a sack just to get more presents. Later that night, pa or mu put the gifts in their socks, but might leave others to big to fit by the side of the bed.

On Christmas morning, children wake up quite early. Some might even turn on the light at two o'clock to peep in their socks. Most of them are awake by six. It is true, however, yet, at this time of the year it's not bright in England until another hour or two. Children eagerly seek their gifts, and the very young play while the dinner is being prepared. At about one o'clock in the afternoon, Christmas dinner is served. The turkey or chicken of the feast is quickly consumed. Children search for coins in their Christmas pudding. The rest of the day is but spent by playing games, and again, eating. Until, the happiest of all, Christmas holidays are all over.

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