Kijavítanátok az angol fogalmazást amit írtam?

To get married is one of the most beautiful experiences in a person* life. In *the past, people had to get married *due the pressure of the society, de jó a because of is. A harmadik mondatot fogalmazd át, ilyet nem írunk, hogy ennek köszönhetően a házasság már nem olyan népszerű, mint régen, mert egyrészt nem csak a liberálisabb gondolkodás miatt alakult ez így, több tényező miatt is. De ha mindenképp megakarod tartani, akkor inkább: *Because of that, weddings are not as popular as it was decades ago. Religions, like chatolicism also *lost their old popularity. Az utolsó mondatnak ebben a bekezdésben nincs értelme, ha előtte azt taglalod, hogy már nem annyira népszerű házasodni szerinted. Vagy az egyiket, vagy a másikat állítod.

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*Altough civil ceremonies have a significant advantage: they are cheaper than the traditional weddings. Itt az Althoughnak akkor lenne értelme, ha mondjuk azt akarnád kifejezni, hogy pl.: Habár a polgári eskünek vannak hátrányai, a hagyományos esküvel szemben előnyei is vannak. Szóval nem illik ide ez a szó, helyettesítsd valami mással, vagy hagyd el.

I*'m gonna introduce how the traditional weddings are work. The priest *then give a speech vagy sermon, a többi részét meg átfogalmaznám másra, nem annyival zárnám le, hogy kérdéseket tesz fel, amikre ha igen a válasz, akkor összeházasodott a pár. Ebben a formában ez karcsú, vérszegény. Fejtsd ki jobban.

To get married is one of the most beautiful experiences in a person's life. In THE past, people had to get married because of the pressure of society, but nowadays we live in a more liberal age. DUE TO THIS, marriage is not AS popular AS IT USED TO BE decades ago. Religions like chatolicism also LOST their old popularity. But IN recent times marriage has become more popular again thanks to government policy.

In Hungary there are two forms of wedding ceremony: civil wedding or RELIGIOUS wedding. RELIGIOUS ceremony is also called traditional wedding.

Both forms have pros and cons as well. In my country, traditional weddings are more popular than civil ceremonies, but THEY ARE more expensive. In addition, religous weddings are nicer than civil ceremonies. HOWEVER, civil ceremonies have a significant advantage: they are cheaper than traditional weddings.

I WILL DESCRIBE traditional weddings. They are not too complicated: the groom and his bride gather with their invited people at a CHURCH. The priest MAKES a speech and he FINALLY poses some questions to the couple. If their answer is yes, they officially BECOME a married couple.

After the RELIGIOUS ceremony there is generally a meal and a party. The guests traditionally give some presents and good wishes to the couple.

Weddings In Hungary

Getting married is one of the most beautiful experiences in a person's life. In the past, people had to get married because of the pressure of society, but today, we live in a more liberal age. Therefore, a formal marriage is not as popular as it was decades ago. Religions, such as Catholicism, also lost their popularity. In recent times, nuptialS have become more popular again thanks to Government's updated policy, which is favouring marriages.

In Hungary, there are two forms of wedding ceremonies: civil weddings and religious weddings. A religious ceremony is also called a traditional wedding.

Both forms have pros and cons as well. In my country, traditional weddings are more popular than civil ceremonies, but they May come with extra costs. In addition, religious weddings are nicer than civil ceremonies. Although, civil ceremonies have a significant advantage: they are cheaper than traditional weddings.

I introduce you to a traditional wedding. The groom and his bride gather with their invited guests in a church. The priest says a speech, asks some questions from the couple regarding their commitment. If both parties are agreeable, the priest gives his blessings and they become an officially married couple.

After the church ceremony, a meal, dancing with guests conclude the celebrations. The invited attendees traditionally give presents and their good wishes to the new couple.