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My dream places and the best form of transportation

I'm very fond of history so I like ancient buildings. They are clues of old historical civilisations and that makes me want to visit such places. The top on my list are the pyramids in Egypt. Along the Nile there was the Egyptian civilisation, and historians claim they built the pyramids thousands of years ago. There are many hieroglyphs on their walls and what's more, pharaohs used those buildings as tombs. But in fact, it is a very controversial topic how the pyramids were built.

The second one on my list is the Machu Picchu in Peru. It is a place with many ruins. It is also a popular destination for tourists.

The last one on my list is a European destination, the Stonehenge. It is a complex of many stones. Actually we don't know who built it and why, as it is a prehistoric monument.

The best transportation form in my opinion is flying. It has many pros such as it is being one of the fastest ways to travel around the world. In addition, when we are traveling with a plane it is much more comfortable than a bus or a car. But naturally, there are also some cons to it, e.g. the cost. The tickets are very expensive, so many people can not afford airplane rides. Furthermore, it pollutes the air which supposedly is one of the causes of global warming.