Kijavítanátok az angol fogalmazást, amit írtam?

1. Az all year elé nem kell 'in'

2. There is a Mayor's office and...

3. Work out egyben - workout

4. Az at the school-ban nem vagyok biztos, azt valaki írja le.

5. In addition után vessző

6. *universities

Egyébként nagyon jól sikerült. :')

Sok hiba van benne.

Helyesiras, nagyon sok szoismetles. A there are helyett probalj valami mas kifejezest talalni

medication, universities, Catholic, stb. Amugy szorakoztato fogalmazas.

My Little Village

I live in a small but beautiful village that is called Tápiószentmárton. 5000 people are living here. Tsztm has a famous hill that is called Attila Hill. According to the legend, the hill has healing energy. Therefore many tourists visit it all year. In the centre of Tsztm there is a Mayor's office and two temples, although the local people generally are not religious. One of them is the Roman Catholic Church's temple; the other is a protestant temple. In our village, there is a bakery. There I buy fresh bread and other cereal products many times. Tsztm has a pharmacy where the people can get medication. My settlement has a football pitch, where the local residents can play and work out. The village also has a school. At the school, there is our swimming pool. I like swimming there. Swimming is my hobby.

On the edge of my village, there is a confectionery where I usually buy cake or ice-cream or both. I like living in my town because of the following reasons.

Firstly, I'm not too fond of bigger cities or big crowds. Cities have air pollution, traffic jams, and high crime rates. I'm not too fond of these things. Besides, the village where I live is peaceful, and the locals are kind and generous. Nature is also near, where I can organize tours with my friends and relatives.

But there are some disadvantages, of course. In villages, there are not too many possibilities. There are too few jobs; there are no universities at all. Despite these things, I never would change my living Place to another.

#1,

to work out - ige

have a workout - fonev

healing energIES

there are THE Mayor's office and

religious

there is a bakery WHERE I buy fresh.. (nem kell folyton a there-t ismételgetni)

local residents helyett lehet LOCALS

because of THE FOLLOWING reasons:

cities usually have air pollution

nature is also CLOSE

Az 'at the school'-ban nem vagyok én sem biztos, de teljesen máshogy is fogalmaznám azt a mondatot. De nyelvtanilag helyesnek tűnik.

Jó lett a fogalmazás, de élő beszédben senki nem mondja így ezeket, majd nézzél sok brit/amerikai angol filmet, sorozatot, meg olvassál kortárs irodalmat amiből fel lehet szedni a valódi beszéd szavait és kifejezéseit.

Cereal products - gondolom peksutemeny. - baked goods, pastries.

Cereal productsnal az ember cornflakes, stb-re gondol.

1. vagyok

Köszi 4-es a javításért. Akkor a work out jó.

Én először is azt írtam volba,hogy which is called-amelyet hívják...-nak. A living there helyrtt,living here. Mivel ott élsz nyugodtan mondhstod,hogy itt,ebben.

A Where I buy szerintem sokkal helyesebb lenne