Nagyon rossz lett az angol fogalmazásom? (Kijavítanátok)?

Hi Tom!

I would like to introduce to you a device, which is very useful.

This tool is the e-book reader. I bought one about two month ago and it is amazing. When I travel by bus, metro, or on any other public transport, I can read what I want. I don't have to carry heavy books. I can upload more than a hundred books onto this device.

It was relatively cheap. There are even more advantages, for example: You need to charge it only once a week. When you are looking at the screen, your eyes don't get tired. This product is environment-friendly as well. They spare a lot of trees.

Unfortunately, it has got plenty of disadvantages as well. If you put it

in a bag, it could be broken/it may break.

Several companies do lose money, because lot of people download e-books illegally. I think this is not ethical. But still, I think you should buy or at least try one. You can try it in media market and if you buy it and later you change your mind, you can return it and you will get your money back.

My brother and my friend have an e-book reader and they like it as well, however they don't use it very often.

If I were you, I would buy this product online, because online everything is cheaper. If you buy it, and you like it, please recommend this gadget to your friends. We (my family and I) don't regret buying this fantastic e-book reader.

To sum it all up, you should buy one or at least give it a try!

Best Regards,

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which

an e-book reader

ago

when I'm travelling

vehicle

I can upload more than a hundred (vagy csak siman hundreds of books)

advantages

when you're watching

the screen, your eyes will not get tired

unfortunately

disadvantages

if you put it ina bag

because

but still helyett despite this

Media Markt

try out

later you would change your mind

get your money back

My brother and my friend have (got) !!!!

use it

because

Plusz elferne meg par linking phrase :)