Átnéznétek? Ha esetleg van benne hiba kijavítanátok? (Angol)

Music can create different feelings in any kind of people. It makes someone happy, and someone become sad by it, but it can clean the mess in heads. I always listen to music, whatever mood I am in. When I'm happy it makes me happier, when I'm sad it could cheer me up and if I become angry it'll calm me down. The music is a good stuff.It doesn't worth to live without music.