Valaki segítene lefordítani angolra, vagy kijavítani nekem? Sürgős

Na lássuk,

My summer was quite exciting and unfortunately it went very fast. I was working which was very hard job but I also went to the beach (vagy pool, public pool, swimming pool) with my friend where we had ice cream and were swimming all day long. I helped my parents and grandparents as they were redecorating the bathroom. The new Harry Potter movie came out in July and I went to watch it with a friend of mine, I enjoyed it a lot, however, it was much better in book. I kept contacting my classmates on MSN who I missed so much but now as the summer ended I can meet them again.

nehéz úgy hozzáírni, hogy nincs támpont, de talán megfelel

My summer was quite great. I have good and bad things in my freetime too. I helped my mum a lot, because she and my grands rebuilt the bathroom. It was realy hard work, but i have good activities, too.

So many times I was in a beach with my old friends. We were swimming all day and ate ice creams and hamburgers. In the beach I met some new face, and I met one of my really old friend. We was talking together so much about us.

But unfortunatelly this summer ended so fast, and I have to go to school again.

/ nagyjából ugyanarról szol amit te írtál ilyenkor bele lehet írni olyan dolgokat is, amik nem igazak. nyelvórán nem ez a lényeg. és gyúrjál rá az angolra, mert nagyon sok helyen hasznát tudod venni.