Ez így helyes angolul? (lent. )

dear xy,

thanks for your letter. i hope my advice will help you.here are some tips to help you with your problem. in my opinion, you shouldn't worry for a long time ,because it is very harmful. nowadays, the driver license is very important in the people's life, but your health is more important. i was afraid before the exams, but once it's all over... if you finished the learning, you should try some sport activity or a massage which helps to calm down.