Angolul irtam egy kis verset, nyelvtanilag elfogadhato (nem kell teljesen tokeletesnek lennie)?

5: "Az it's (it is rövidítése) az, ami oda kell."

Vak vezet világtalant…

Can I write TO you?

I hope you are well,

This poem is true,

Though bad as hell…

How are you there,

How is your mood? (ilyen egy angol nem kerdezne)

If we want to compare:

Have you enough food?

I text cAuse I love you,

Maybe you know,

But I have noT A clue,

Where are you and how…

Still DO you have the ring

Which I GAVE YOU? (nem jo a szorend, felesleges a szenvedo)

Or DID you keep any anything,

THAT WENT over THE Caspian Sea? (rossz szorend)

Mug or the boxes

Or memories only, (vagy only vagy just, felesleges a ketto egyutt)

Im just trying to ask now,

CAuse there nothing I can see…

You wanted to go from here,

I accepted it of course

And you had suddenLY disappearED,

AltHough there was nothing I forceD.

You had quite GOOD chances here,

Probably you remember,

The “…” job was near,

They called you in December.

I know its doesn’t matter now

And I understand your wants,

You know where and how

And what are your plans - (nem rimel)

But now it’s ValentineS

And I want you to know

All the thoughts of mine

Insecure where you and how… (???)

"A know es a now pedig szerintem elegge rimel"

nem. nó-náó. nem rimel. a here-disappear szerintem jo