Helyesen írtam meg? (többi lent)

In the summer, I went to Balaton, where I spent a week with my family. We stayed in an apartmen. The lake near the apartmen. My father and my brother, surfing everyday.

We went to restaurants at evening ,which was close to the apartmen. The food was delicious.

We swam a lot, and went on many trips.

At 17th of July I went to croatia with my family and with my mother’s friends. We travelled by car. We stayed at Zagrab in a hotel. We stayed for a week. We stayed in an appartement, which was very nice. From the terrace we had a nice lookout over the sea.We swam a lot. In the evenings we went to the nearest town for a walk and to bought some gifts. And sometimes we went to restaurants. The weather was usually sunny and hot, but sometimes a bit cloudy. We went home threw Austria.

At summer I often met with my friends, we discussed the good things that have happened to us.

Átnéznétek ,hogy mennyire helyesek a mondataim? Illetve szeretném beleírni az úszás mellé ,hogy "sokat úsztunk és napoztunk" csak nem tudom ,hogy van a napozni..

Köszönöm a válaszokat előre is!:)