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Dear, Christopher


First of all, I want to tell you how I am.

The school starts on 1st September, I have been waiting since the beginning of summer, because I have missed my friends all summer. I hope, I can take my intermediate english exam next year, because I need for it in the future.

On summer I was in Italian with my family. It was so great, because we were at a beach (I dont know which), and I adore the sand, and the sunshine. When we had come home, my brother returned to America, cuz he has been studying there, for more than 2 years. He is on holiday too. Next ime he will come home on Christmas, but I think he loves America, so he isnt sad.

Today, I was with my dad, and we went to the shopping centre where we have to bought pencils, pens and books for the school.

All in all, enough. And how are you? When will you come to Hungary? Hope that, I see you very soon.

Lots of Love.

_______________________(my name)


2009. aug. 22. 02:44
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Dear Christopher .


First of all I want to tell you how I am.

The school starts on 1st September, I have been waiting since the beginning of summer, because I have missed my friends all summer. I hope, I can take my intermediate English exam next year because I’ll need it in the future.

In summer I was in Italy with my family. It was so great, because we were on a beach (I don’t know which), and I adore the sand and the sunshine. When we came home, my brother returned to America, because he has been studying there, for more than 2 years. He is on holiday, too. Next time he will come home at Christmas, but I think he loves America, so he isn’t sad.

Today I was with my dad, and we went to to the shopping centre where we had to buy pencils, pens and books for the school.

All in all, enough. And how are you? When will you come to Hungary? Hope that I’ll see you very soon.

Lots of Love.

______(my name)

2009. szept. 10. 13:25
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 12/12 anonim ***** válasza:
Tulajdonképpen nem rossz, de érdemes lett volna elolvasnod az előző oldalon adott válaszainkat. Megszólításnál, elköszönésnél vesszőt írunk. Az "all in all, enough." helyett is adtunk megoldást stb.
2009. szept. 10. 22:21
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