Nyelvtanilag helyes ez a fogalmazás? (Housing)

Housing

I live in a house with garden on the outskirts of Budapest. It is have three-bedroom. This house is rent. Our house is yellow. It is fenced.

When you enter the house you can find yourself in the hall. On your left, you can find the sitting-room. It is the biggest room. There are a TV, a sofa, a computer, a desk and a wardrobe. On your right you can find my bedroom. My bedroom is girlish furnished. My favorite piece of furniture is the bed. My bed is very lovely. It is have pink bedclothes. What I hate about my room is the carpet. Next to the sitting room you can find the toilet. If you go along the hallway you can find the dining room and the kitchen.

We keep pets in the garden.

My mum would like to move somewhere more quiet. My neighbors are loud.

kezdő vagyok, de felelni kell. 7.-es szintű fogalmazás kéne.