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I came to school happily and cheerfully. I had a very nice, but short autumn holiday. It lasted only for a week. I relaxed a lot. I stayed up late every evening, so I got up late and stayed in bed in the mornings. I also met my friends during the holiday.

We went to the cemetary one day. The candles there were wonderful. Then me and my parents went to Budapest to visit our relatives. (vagy: Me and my parents payed a visit to our relatives in Budapest)

I had time to read the compulsory reading too. I was watching films, listening to music and sitting in front of my computer a lot. I talked with my friends from abroad on the internet. The holiday ended quickly. I am looking forward to the Christmas Holidays.

I came to school happily and cheerfully. I had a very nice, but short autumn holiday. It lasted only for a week. I relaxed a lot. I stayed up late every NIGHT, so I WOKE up late and stayed in bed in the mornings. We, as a family, enjoyed meals together.

One day, we went to the cemetEry. The ARRAY OF BURNING CANDLES were wonderful. MY PARENTS AND I also went to Budapest to visit some of our relatives. I MET WITH SOME OF THE FAMILY MEMBERS AND FRIENDS. I did not play any sports, but played with my dogs every day.

I also had time to read the compulsory reading too. I was watching films, listening to music and sitting in front of my computer MOST DAYS. I talked with my friends from abroad on the Internet. The holiday HAS ended TOO quickly. I am NOW looking forward to the Christmas Holidays.