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Education At Home
The education is one of the most important part of a man life. Why? Because the proper education teaches not only how to think, how to learn, but it gives many opportunities children. In other words: it determines the man's life in childhood. Researchers say the expectable lifespan and the life quality also depend on the education. I don't have the proper words to express how important the education is.
The education has 2 significant forms: education at home or education at school. Both have advantages and disadvantages as well.
Education at school is the traditional way of teaching. In this way the cildren are all together in a classroom. It is very good because it can help the socializing of children, but on the other hand it is very bad because the teacher has to share his concentration between many children and it is not efficient enough. But this kind of education is free basically. In contrast the education at home is can be very expensive, but it is a more efficient way to educate the children than the traditional way. But on the other hand the child is at home alone, so the parents have to find a way to provide the necessery socializing of their child. Because the children need company.
I think both forms of education can be very good. But if I had a child I would certainly choose the home education because in my opinion it is the most efficient way to educate children.
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Education is one of the essential parts of a person’s life. Why? Because proper education teaches not only how to think, how to learn, but it also gives children many opportunities through life. In other words: it may determine someone’s future starting from childhood.
Researchers say that life expectancy and quality of life may also depend on formal education. I can not describe by words how important education is.
Schooling has two significant forms: home educating and formal education delivered at schools. Both have their advantages and disadvantages.
Delivering a set curriculum at school is the traditional way of teaching. Students attend classes together in classrooms. It is helpful as it provides socialising opportunities for children and teaching them to share. From another perspective, teachers have to pay attention to all students, and some pupils may miss out.
Public schooling is a cost-effective way for many families to educate their children. In contrast, home education can be costly, but it provides individual attention, lessons may be taught at appropriate levels to benefit the children.
On the other hand, the child may miss out on socialising, mixing with their peers. Parents would have to find ways to include necessary social settings.
I think both forms of education can be very beneficial. However, if I had a child, I would undoubtedly choose at-home education because, in my opinion it is the most efficient way to educate children.
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