Helyes szerintetek ez így?

We were sitting in a restaurant down at the river

There was light in his deep-brown eyes, silver glitter

We were walking downtown in the middle of the road

Told me he's always in a rush somewhere around the globe

And then standing on the rooftop my heart was beating fast

This time it wasn't me, but the world was the outcast

His scent was fog around me, we got this gentle intimacy

Wanted to be a sky-high tree and him to be the ivy

Seems like soil was polluted by his pride and my insecurity

If only he had made things clear for me...