Milyen hibák vannak ebben az angol levélben?

I és nem i ez végig hiba

just come back és nem got back

do you know

such as the Casa Rosada és nem like

a sincerely-s mondat új sorba

Did you know that there was the widest street in the world?

There are plenty of things to do there.

We spent most of our time

Had already handed

Szerintem a végére nem your's sincerely kell, mert az hivatalos.

Inkább pl. best wishes

Sorry, i haven't written for a while, but i've just got back from a week holiday FROM Buenos Aires. We stayed in one of the BEST HOTEL OF THE CITY AT the Plaza de Mayo., right in the heart of the city. It was ideal for sightseeing and shopping. B. Aires is an amazing place. It's the largest city in Argentina, very modern and exciting, but relaxing and cultured at the same time. Did you know it has the world's widest street? There ARE plenty to do there, too. We spent MOST of our time WITH shopping and visiting the main sights, like the 'Casa Rosada' - it is one of the most beautiful building i've ever seen! Unfortunately, i had a mishap last day. While i was shopping i lost my passport. When I went to the police stationt to report it, some kind OF person had ALREADY handed it in. Well, all my news is that.

Love,

Barry

Itt-ott csupa nagy betűvel jelöltem a jó változatot, máshol csak kihagytam a rosszat.

"We stayed in one of the BEST HOTEL OF THE CITY"

Itt hotelS van, mert egyike a sok jó hotelnek.

"There ARE plenty to do there, too. "

Itt IS lesz, mert a plenty az nem megszámlálható.

"one of the most beautiful building i've ever seen!"

megintcsak buildingS

"Unfortunately, i had a mishap last day. "

Itt ON THE LAST DAY van.

"some kind OF person had ALREADY handed it in."

some kind of person -> SOMEONE

"Well, all my news is that."

THAT IS ALL OF MY NEWS.

Mert nem összes hírem ez, hanem ez az összes hírem.

Sztem nagyon jó lett a fogalmazásod, jól hangzott, észre sem vettem hibákat, csak egy-kettőt:) de az utolsó kettő kommentelővel egyetértek. Az első kettővel nem.

---I've just got back--- az helyes.