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The historic city of Edinburgh is in south-eastern Scotland.

I went there recently for a relaxing weekend to escape from the stress of busy life and I certainly chose the right place to go. The city is the capital of Scotland and is known as a centre of culture and education. Many of the buildings date from the 18th and 19th centuries. The weather is usually rainy and it often snows. There are lots of interesting things to see and do in Edinburgh. I visited the castle and I went to the zoo. I also went shopping in the city's many stores and boutiques. They were fantastic! I tried some very tasty Scottish foods while I was there. The food was wonderful. I also bought some souvenirs to take home with me. i had a lovely weekend in Edinburgh. The people are helpful and frendly. The city itself is delightful place for a short break. I had a wonderful time. I think it's a great place for a holiday.