Kijavítaná ezt nekem valaki? Angol órámra kéne.

nem tudom, ez gépen kell vagy írásban? ami alsóvonás, onnét szót töröltem, ami nagybetű, ott szót cseréltem vagy toldottam be. Stilisztikai hibákat nem javítottam

I think you should CONSIDER what contract to sign. But I think it is a good idea to accept the card, because, as you wrote, this would make _ you more financially independent from your parents. And this is the beginning how YOU CAN independently manage _ your money. And of course you can buy everything what you want and not just that things what your parents allow _ you. You can travel with your friends or just talk TO them and you can _ GO _ IN a bar and drink _ beers or something else. But if you accept the card you must _ look _ for a job, because you have to pay back _ the money. And this amount is very big. But you are just 18 years old so maybe you can find a good job WHERE YOU EARN enough to pay. And when you have a firm job you can pay back _ the money. Besides you can continue your studies. And you CAN _ pay your books and everything else and you don't have to borrow money from your parents. I have a card too. I like it, because OF THE facilitates OF purcase. And when I go abroad I can pay simply, because no amount of hassle like with cash. For example I forget to bring _ cash WITH MYSELF and I am just staying at the cash desk and I don't know what should I do. To sum _ up you should make an agreement with the bank and accept the card.