Kijavítaná valaki az angol fogalmazásomat?

My mother does the housework in all time.Sometimes my sister vacuuming the carpets.Bit I love doing housework.I love tidy in my room,making the bed,washing up.I don` t like vaccuuming and sweeping.My mother like some of my friends,but she doesn´t let me stay out late and dont allow me to going out.She make me study a lot.I live in a flat,in 13. district.I love my neighbourhood,because here are all about.Here are a lot restaurant,libary,shops,centre, f.e.:RAM,WestEnd.Transport is very good.In my street is a bus,metro and tram.My sisters are layers,because I will be too layer.I will earn a lot of money.When someone with weight problems suffer,I think,he or she does every day 2 or 3 hours doing sport,for example jogging,.vegetable and a lot fruits eating with vitamincontent,slowly and five-time eating.Doesn˙t (szabad) smoken. Extreme sport are expensive,dangerous,and spectacular.But I think,the health is importanter(fontosabb).I would like maybe a few extreme sport try out.Rafting and paraglider is sympathetic.On the fast and wild river in large wave can I adventures memorys earn.Paraglider has a big risiko.I fly as bird full alone.Free runner(ezek a szabad futók, a sport neve free running) run in a city and jump and climb over objects,fences,roofs…For extreme sport need stamina and willpower.In sommer I prefer travelling and visiting all,what I can,museums,castles…I don´t like lie on the sun.I prefer going swimming(hogy van az,hogy a napon heverés helyett inkább úszok?).For swimming I need swimming dress,and suncream,for lazy lieing I need sunglasses,suncream,straw hat….Mobile phones have a lot advantages and disadvantages.I can call for help,have alarmclock and calculator,I can in internet surfing,playing games and taking photos.I can messages sending.But the people getting addicting,the smartphones are expensive,have health risks,and take time from other things(for example socialise).Ringtones are sometimes noisy.

Ez nem egybefüggő szöveg,csak kérdésekre kell majd válaszolnom ezek alapján.(Ne cikizzetek kérlek,tudom,hogy elég rossz,most kezdtem el angolul tanulni egy haladó csoportban :S )