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Egy ifjúsági szállónak 3 szempont szerint kell levelet írnom, hogy miért szeretnék részt venni a programjukban.

1. Whether you have been to Britain (if yes, how many times)

2. In which month(s) you want to visit Britain.

3. Which parts of Britain you want to visit.

Dear Sir or Madam,

Until I went to Britain twice, but it was only a few days the chance to stay there.

I really liked the life there, so I want to visit more time.

I want to stay in their hostel for 2 months. From June to August, when it's possible I would like to spend my time during the summer holidays.

During my stay there I want to visit the British Museum, Warwick Castle, Stonehenge and Cornwall.

And I would like to see the other major sights as well. I wish there was opportunity for sports as well.

Yours faithfully,

X!

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