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Communication on the internet is a new matter. In our days a lot of people are using to talk with the others.

The biggest advantage of the communication on the internet that is very fast, simple, diverting and free against the mobile phone. Additionally, on public web sides easily may to come to know new people.

Furthermore, it may dangerous because baddies without difficult can steal our photos, videos that they can use for amoral aim. They can reedit these files and shame us.

On the other hand, a lot of people become dependent at the internet. It is a real and a very serious problem. The dependents are staying all day in front of the computer. The trap of the internet has more and more victims.

In conclusion, I feel that the communication on the internet is a new and good matter but it has too many disadvantages, therefore why I say it is dangerous and moreover, it causes dependence.