13 éves vsgyok. Nem vagyok valami jó angolból, írtam egy dalt az érzéseimről. Ha valaki van olyan kedves és jó angolos légyszi javítsátok a hibákat? .
when my father left, I broke
There was nothing so like it used to
Ohhh dad say why you left
I don’t understand why it was not as good so far
My friends don't like me
therefore I cried all night
there is no nobody for me
therefore i just cry
I hope that tomorrow will be a better life
I hope that tomorrow will be a better life
I try to understand the adults
I try to achieve my goals
I try to catch the sun
If there is only an arm's length
when my father left, I broke
There was nothing so like it used to
Ohhh dad say why you left
I don’t understand why it was not as good so far
I hope that tomorrow will be a better life
I hope that tomorrow will be a better life
My friends don't like me
therefore I cried all night
there is no nobody for me
therefore i just cry
I try to understand the adults
I try to achieve my goals
I try to catch the sun
If there is only an arm's length
I hope that tomorrow will be a better life
I hope that tomorrow will be a better life
Szia!:)
Van benne pár hiba, de nem olyan sok.
"when my father left, I broke" - "when my father left I was broken"
"There was nothing so like it used to" - There was nothing like that before (Semmi sem olyan mint azelőtt volt)
I don’t understand why it was not as good so far - I can't understand why it wasn't as good as it use to be (Nem értem miért nem volt olyan jó mint azelőtt)
therefore I cried all night - therefore I was crying all night
therefore i just cry -there for I have just cried
Amúgy szép amit írtál. Remélem tudtam segíteni:)
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