Van hiba az alábbi szövegben?

Érettségis, képösszehasonlítós, képleírós feladattal kapcsolatos az alábbi szövegem. Ha átnéznétek és kijavítanátok annak nagyon örülnék, vagy ha esetleg valahol tudnátok a mondatokat magasabb szinten elmondani, leírni, azt is ezer örömmel várom!

Az első kép egy kicsit mintha régi stílusú étterem, a második pedig egy gyors étterem hasonló a mekihez.

A következőkre kell kitérnem:

1. What is the atmosphere like in the restaurants shown?

2. How do you think the people are feeling?

3. What do you think they are eating?

4. Do you ever aet out? How often?

Ez pedig az a szöveg amit írtam, amit mondanék:

The first picture depicts a traditional restaurant where the atmosphere is friendly and calm because in the good restaurant there are intelligent people who are can be cultured. It gives the impression of the people are happy because everybody are eating or speaking to someone but in fact i cannot see a lot of emotion in it so I'm not sure.

As i have mentioned before i cannot see the cannot see much small details in the picture so I don't know what they are eating. In contrast the second photos was taken in a fast food restaurant and I can see some people are eating hamburgers and the little boy is eating schips. I can say that in similar place like this the atmosphere a little bit different like the earlier one because it's crowded in afternoon when the students are finish the school and go to eat some unhealth but delicious foods. Therefore in that time the area is so loud because everyone have fun and the teenagers get to know each other and the latest thing can be an advantages in my opinion. Of course it has much disadvantages like the meals'price is similar than in the other restaurants in the fast food restaurants we get smaller dose. Nvertheless when I'm in Szeged most of the time i go to the Mcdonald's even if it's not cheap and the best for myself.

Moving back to the first photo it has also some advantage for entance if someone would like to a romantic dinner or a family dinner this place is the best.