Kijavitana nekem valaki az alabbi angol szoveget? Koszonom :D
Motivational letter
My name is Filep Sándor-Dávid, I am a student of the Reformed High School from Cluj, I am in the tenth class.I was born in 10th of October 1999, at Cluj.I spent my childhood at Szek, I started school at Szamosujvar,here I finished my first 8 classes.During these years I was learning to play in piano for 8 years.After this I went to the Reformed High School.Here I tried to represent the school with going to contests like the Aranka Gyorgy country sized contest, Olimpics from Hungarian language and history, Xantus Janos biology contest, but I also was part of the team that represented the school in the contest named Guardians of our legacy,but later I had to leave the team because I had no time for this too.In my free time I go to swim, I often run in the park, but when I can I go volunteering, for example I was volunteer at the Hungarian Days of Cluj.I am also choirmember,I like it and I try to take part in the school’s events.
I heard about the project last year, but I didn’t joined because i don’t felt ready.That journey would be a great chance for me to meet new people,I always wanted to try how life’s going in other countries.I never been in Netherlands before, but how I heard it’s a beautiful country.With a project like this I should improve my English knowledge, I should try myself how can I succeed in other countries with my English skills.It would be a test for myself too, I want to demonstrate to myself so I can succeed in a new place.I am curious about western european life,the way of they think about each other,strangers,culture,past and religion.Beside this I am curious about their educational sistem, I heard it’s very different from ours,and I would like to try how it is.Overall I think this project is a rare chance what I have to try.
I think I am ideal for the project, because I am communicative and I like meeting new people and I can talk with almost anyone about anything. Beside this I always try to be nice and I am interested about every new thing and I always try to learn interesting things. This trip would be a good way to learn for me. If somebody asks about Romania, Hungary or about our situation in Transylvania, I can explain to him the situations what I think is a good thing. So I have knowledge about our way of life, our culture and I can explain this to anybody with pleasure. My English knowledge is also good enough to represent the school good in Netherlands.
I really would like to get this chance because I don’t know if I would have a chance like this in the future. I only heard good from my friends about the project, and I would like to go to Netherlands to get experience.
Filep Sándor-Dávid
X.A
Ha nem kapsz választ,próbálkozz itt..
Ez hosszi... :(
My name is Sándor-Dávid Filep. I go to Reformed High School in Cluj-Napoca. ... I was born on 10th October, 1999 in Cluj-Napoca. ... I learnt to play the piano for 8 years. (szerintem olyan nem írunk egy motivációs levélben, hogy megpróbáltam képviselni...) I represented my school on different contests, including The Hungarian Language and Literature contest „Aranka György”, the Hungarian language and History Olympiads, Biology contest "Xantus János", I also was in the team that ... (szerintem olyat se írunk bele, hogy erre sem volt időm, de tény, hogy nem sűrűn írtam motivációs levelet). I go swimming ... I was a volunteer on the H. Days in Cluj.
... I did not join because I did not feel ready. ... I have never been to Netherlands before but I heard it's...
I would improve... I would try myself... It would be a test, too, for I want to prove to myself that I can... Western European life ... educational system ... I would like to know how (in what way)
I am interested in every new thing
sutiation, which I think is a good thing
represent our school well in N.
Nem biztos, hogy mindent megtaláltam, bocsi. A versenyeknél lehet esetleg írni, hogy 'named after Aranka György'. Ahogy előttem írták, pontok és vesszők után legyen szóköz. Ha hivatalos levél, nem tennék bele összevont alakot. Nekem furcsa ez a sok "próbálkozás", de mint mondám, nem vagyok szakember motivációs levél ügyben.
Good luck to this project.
Kapcsolódó kérdések:
Minden jog fenntartva © 2024, www.gyakorikerdesek.hu
GYIK | Szabályzat | Jogi nyilatkozat | Adatvédelem | Cookie beállítások | WebMinute Kft. | Facebook | Kapcsolat: info(kukac)gyakorikerdesek.hu
Ha kifogással szeretne élni valamely tartalommal kapcsolatban, kérjük jelezze e-mailes elérhetőségünkön!