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The Shanty Towns of the 3rd World

Shanty towns are the slum districts that are built on the suburbs of big cities in the Third World. Lots of people come from rural areas to escape from natural disasters, civil war, or in the hope of getting A good job and ENJOY a better life. These poor inhabitants live in improvised dwellings made OUT OF scrapS like cardboard, plywood, corrugated metal or anything else that come AT HAND.

Shanty towns are getting larger and larger, they might EVEN grow as HUGE as a city. Since they lack public utilities, living conditions are extremely unsanitary and unsavoury. Due to high rates of crime, drug abuse and widespread disease slums put on an enormous burden on THE city they are adjacent to.

The Shanty Towns of the Third World

Shanty towns are the slum districts that are built in the suburbs of big cities in the Third World. Lots of people come from rural areas to escape from natural disasters, civil war, or in the hope of getting jobs and enjoying a better life. These poor inhabitants live in improvised dwellings made from scraps like cardboard, plywood, corrugated metal or anything else that comes at hand. Shanty towns are getting larger and larger, they might even grow as big as a city. Since they lack public utilities, living conditions are extremely unsanitary and unsavoury. Due to high rates of crime, drug abuse and widespread disease, slums put on an enormous burden on a city they are adjacent to.