Ez így helyes angolul?

Most megyek gimnáziumba, és gyakorlásképp írtam egy bemutatkozót. Mennyire helyes a szöveg? Teljesen saját írású, és sajnos nem vagyok jó angolból annyira.

My name is __________. I’m 15 years old. I was born in Debrecen, on the 15th of September, 2002. I live in a family house, and there are a big garden. My address is 34, _______ street, Dunaújváros (<--- ez csak kitaláció). This is a silent and calm town.

My name isn’t common in Hungary. My nickname is ______, I like it more than ________. I can speak two languages. My native language is obviously Hungarian, but I learn in German for 5 years, and English for 3 years. English is easier than German. I’m a student now in the __________ Secondary School. I was a pupil in the Dunaújvárosi Protestant Primary School and Kindergarten.

I am short, my height is only 156 cm. To tell the truth I’m a little bit overweight and unattractive. I’ve got a medium height honey blonde hair. I’ve got freckles in my face, I don’t like it. I have braces on my teeth.

I’ve got a complex personality. I’m optimistic. I’m a shy, but a friendly girl. I’m helpful, but a bit cheeky. I’m insecure.

Javítsátok ki kérlek a hibáimat, köszönöm előre is! :-)