Ki tudnátok javítani az angol levelemet?

Hi Jane!

Thanks for your letter. I am very excited because I've got this opportunity that I am writing about to you in this letter.

My brother and his girlfriend have been meeting each other for 6 months. I think this is a very long relationship.

Mark went to a beach party which was held in Budapest and he met Lola there. They fell in love. It was very romantic. The girl is very nice and she has a very good sense of humour. In my opinion this is a very good realtionship.

My brother is very happy now and I think this is the most important for me. I hope they will spend a lot of time with each other.

Kezdetnek ennyi, de biztos jön még, aki kijavítja az én írásomat is. :D

Egyébként annyit nem értek, hogy az elején írod, hogy kaptál egy jó lehetőséget, és hogy erről fogsz írni a levélben. De a kifejtésnél már a tesód kapcsolatát ecseteled. Ezt eredetileg is így szántad?

Hi Jane!

Thanks for your letter. I am very excited about writing to you.

My brother and his girlfriend are together for 6 months, I think that's a really long time.

Mark met Lola at a beach party in Budapest and they fall in love. It was very romantic. She is lovely and has a great sense of humour. In my opinion they have a very good relationship.

My brother is delighted and that is the most important for me. I hope they will stay together for a long time.

Nem mondom hogy tökéletes, várom erre is a javításokat :) De kicseréltem a legtöbb "very"-t.

Szerintem:

....I can write... vagy

...opportunity to write to you....

...very long time.

They fell in.... (az utána levő It was... miatt)

... very beautifull...

....is they have a very nice relationship.

lots of time together.

Hi Jane,

Thanks for your letter.

I am very excited to have the opportunity to write to you.

My brother and his girlfriend have been seeing each other for six months. In think this is quite a long relationship.

Mark went to be church party, which was held in Budapest, and met Lola there.

They fell in love. It was so romantic.

The girl is very nice with a great sense of humour. I believe, it is a good relationship.

My brother is very happy now and this visit he most important thing to me.

I hope they will stay together for a long time to come.

Hogy miket irtam !

* I think this is...

went to a beach party...

very happy now and this is the most...