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Descriptive esszét kell írnom angolórára. Én megírtam, de segÍtenétek kijavítani, mert ez az utolsó jegyünk és nem szeretném elrontani? A lényeg az, hogy: "Telling, not showing! "

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Being in the amazingly beautiful museum of Dresden, I feel like the luckiest person in the world. The Zwinger, having three different sections is considered the biggest museum of Germany.


It is April, the first. The floral bed has already burst into flowers, little tulips are growing taller and taller. Two children are running around the huge trees and speaking in an exalted strain: ten more minutes and the maths section will be opened.


Being in this section silence broods over the room. Families are picking one's step on the slipping, glossy floor admiring the tall and rusty telescopes, which have been used at nights, due to their width angle of sight. Their copper body is covered with platinum. The maps in the cartography are also wearing the time's wrinkles, their sheets are becoming yellower and yellower.


An old woman is sitting on a fence either she can try the platinum compasses or not. A tall, handsome worker took some steps towards the cheerful woman and informed her that the exhibitions cannot be touched.


Reaching the second floor, we arrive at the terrace. The lively atmosphere combines with glamour. Green leaves, blue sky, cold and fresh air: magical! The milling crowd happily but slowly goes to the next section, which is the art section.



2016. jún. 19. 17:36
 1/3 anonim ***** válasza:
Feltételezem, patinásak voltak azok a teleszkópiumok, nem platinásak.
2016. jún. 19. 18:32
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 2/3 anonim ***** válasza:

Having visited the awesome museum of Dresden, I felt like the luckiest person in the whole world. The Zwinger, which sports three huge sections, is appraised as the biggest museum in Germany-wide.


It is 1st April. The flower beds already broke out into blossoms, some petite tulips are growing reaching high. Two children are running around the huge trees and talking in an exalted strain. Ten more minutes and the maths segment opens.


Silence broods over the room. Families are picking up step on the slipping, glossy floor. They admiringly peer at the protracted rusty telescopes, which were used during the night, along with their wide angle of sight. Their copper body is covered with platinum. The maps in the cartography are also wearing the creases of time, their sheets are gradually becoming yellow.


An old woman is sitting on the fence. Either she can probe the platinum compass or not. A tall, handsome worker takes some steps toward the cheerful woman and informs her that exhibitions cannot be touched.


Reaching the second floor, we arrive at a terrace. The lively atmosphere combines with glamour. Green leaves, blue sky, cold and fresh air. Absolutely magical! The milling crowd happily but slowly moves to the next section, which is dedicated to the arts.

2016. jún. 19. 18:39
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 3/3 anonim ***** válasza:

...the exhibits cannot be touched...


És, az isten szerelmére, patina!!! :D

2016. jún. 19. 19:17
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