Valaki megnézné ezeknek az angol mondatoknak a helyesírását nyelvtani szempontból?

When my mum comes in, I fall down (bár fogalam sincs, mit akar ez a mondat jelenteni)

That reminds me when I was at Balaton one year ago...

I love listening to music very much, my favourite (track/song) is...

Tomorrow I will travel to New York, where I will work all year

When I noticed it, the coupple had been broken (bár ezt se értem)

Tomorrow I will travel to New York, where I'll be working for the year ( for the whole year).

By the time I've noticed, a couple of them have been broken./a couple of them broke.

When Mum comes in I fall down on the floor.

That reminds me when I was at Lake Balaton a year ago...

I love listen to music very much. My favourite is hip-hop ...

Tomorrow I will travelling to New York where I will working all year around.

I noticed the cup was broken.

3-as, nem hibatlan. Vannak benne nyelvtani hibak.

A "cup"-ot honnan szedted?

A couple az egy part, ket darabot valamibol jelent. Eddig mint szleng szo, nem hallottam. Megirnad, hogy hogy hasznaljak a fiatalok?

Ha couple mint egy parrol akarsz irni, akkor:

By the time/When I noticed, the couple have broken up.

Szetmentek.