Segítene valaki angol versenyre lefordítani egy szöveget?

Christmas in my family is very eventful. In the morning, my mum starts to cook the feast. After the lunch, me and my dad begin to decorate the Christmas tree, and when it is done, we prepare our presents and put them under the tree after eating some cake. Then, dad, mum and me gave the gifts to each other, we go to my grandparents' place to celebrate Christmas here as well. At the Christmas table, there are the grandfathers, grandmother, aunt, uncle, cousin, dad, mum and me. The feast always starts with delicious soup. At the second course, you can choose from fish, pig roast, stuffed cabbage, aspic, schnitzel and many vegetables. For desert, we usually eat the traditional beigli. After dinner we relax, converse, and give presents to each other. As the family gathering always lasts until late, I go to bed tired when we arrive home. The next day, I am the one to wake up and find the gifts under the tree first, which were brought by Jesus after we had fallen asleep at night.

My favourite holiday is Christmas.

Ennyi volna, viszont nézessék még át valakivel, mert pár részben nem vagyok biztos. Pl. hogy a Jézuska az Jesus, vagy inkább Baby Jesus. Bár az furcsa lenne ezért nem írtam le.

Továbbá nem igazán értettem a fogalmazás időrendjét, mert a legelején azt írja, hogy miután anya megfőzte az ebédet, odaadják egymásnak az ajándékot hárman (anya apa gyerek), de mikor a másnapról ír, azt mondja, hogy legelőször ő kel fel hármuk közül, és bontja ki az ajándékokat.

Csak gondoltam szólok, mert általában a versenyeken a fogalmazás felépítését is pontozzák.

Remélem segítettem valamit.

Christmas in my family is an eventful and exciting time. In the morning mum starts to cook the celebratory meal. After lunch, dad and I begin to decorate the Christmas tree, and when it is done, we prepare our presents and put them under the tree after eating some cake. Then, dad, mum and I exchange presents with each other. Following this, we go to my grandparents' place to celebrate Christmas there as well. At the festive table, both of the grandfathers, grandmother, aunt, uncle, cousin, dad, mum and I are seated. The feast always starts with delicious soup. For the main course, one can choose from fish, roast pork, stuffed cabbage, aspic, schnitzel and a variety of vegetables. For dessert, we usually eat the traditional walnut and poppyseed rolls. After dinner we relax, talk and hand out the presents to each other. As the family gathering always lasts until late, I go to bed tired when we arrive home. The next day, I am the one who wakes up first and find the gifts under the tree, which were brought by Baby Jesus after we had all fallen asleep

My favourite festive season is Christmas.