Angol fogalmazásban kérek segítséget?!
Ennek a szövegnek az alapján kell írni egy fogalmazást Kecskemétről! légyszi segítsetek benne.
1. I live in Porto, which is a city on the coast in the north of Portugal. It has a population of 300,000 people and it’s the second biggest city in Portugal.
2. It’s a beautiful city, and it’s great for walking around. There are lots of narrow streets, and it’s full of churches, museums, and markets. There’s an area called Foz where there are a lot outdoor bars and restaurants- people go there at the weekend to sit in the sun, drink coffee, and watch the Atlantic.
3. The weather here is very different from the south of Portugal. The winter can be very wet, and it sometimes rains for days. The summer in wonderful – it’s sunny but not usually too hot, and it’s great for going to the mountans or the beach.
4. Porto is famous for port wine, which is only produced here. The biggest tourist attraction in Porto is probably the – there are some beautiful bridges, including one designed by Eiffle, and lots of tourist go on boat trips. There’s a festival in June called Sao Joao, with a lot of fireworks and people in the streets, and everybody spends most of the evening hitting each other with plastic hammers.
5. But I think the best things about Porto are tha people and the atmosphere. It’s quite small and it’s very safe and friendly. It’s a working city and it has a real sense of history, and that’s the main reason why I like living here so much.
Ezek a vázlatpontok, amiknek benne kell legyen. de nem csak ennyinek kell lennie:S
- population of 100.000
- It has situated in the middle of Hungary between the rivers The Danube and Tisza.
-Main Square, Town Hall, Ornamented Palace, The Great Church, Zero Kilometer Stone, House of Silence and Tecnology.
- Kecskemét is a famous its peach brandy and Zoltán Kodály and József Katona.
- Future of Europe (festival). Wine/Beer Festival /Folk Dance Festival.
válasza:Istenem, mire begépelted, már meg is lennél, kb csak behelyettesíted a vázlatpontokat. -.-'
Egyszerű behelyettesítés, + ha "nagyon" megerőlteted magad, írsz hozzá 1-2 párszavas egyszerű mondatot még.
Például ilyen mondatokat szretnék beleírni, csak nem valószínű hogy ez így jó:
I live in Kecskemét, which is a city It has situated in the middle of Hungary between the rivers The Danube and Tisza.
válasza:Akkor bocs. Amúgy én így írnám:
I live in Kecskemét, which is a city in Hungary. It is situated in the middle of Hungary between two rivers, The Danube and Tisza.
It has a population of 100,000 people.
It’s a beautiful city, there are lots of sights, for exapmle Main Square, Town Hall, Ornamented Palace, The Great Church, Zero Kilometer Stone, House of Silence and Tecnology. You must see all of them if you come here.
Kecskemét is famous for peach brandy and Zoltán Kodály and József Katona.
There are lots of festivals, such as Future of Europe, Wine/Beer Festival /Folk Dance Festival.
Na ezek az alapok, meg hozzá csaphatsz pár mondatot, és az 5. ponthoz írj még pár mondatot, h miért szereted a várost: emberek, környék, v akármi. :)
Írtam hozzá 2 mondatot, vagyis inkább találtam és átalakítottam. Ez így jó lenne egész fogalmazásnak?
I live in Kecskemét, which is a city in Hungary. It is situated in the middle of Hungary between two rivers, The Danube and Tisza.
It has a population of 100,000 people and it’s the eighth biggest city in Hungary.
It’s a beautiful city, there are lots of sights, for exapmle Main Square, Town Hall, Ornamented Palace, The Great Church, Zero Kilometer Stone, House of Science and Tecnology. You must see all of them if you come here.
The Main Square is a green island of serenity in downtown Kecskemet. Locals and tourists like enjoy sitting on the benches, watching the kids at play, the teenagers showing off their bicycle and skateboard skills.
One of the most prominent buildings of Kecskemet Main Square, the Ornamented Palace was designed by Geza Markus in Secession style.
Kecskemét is famous for peach brandy and Zoltán Kodály and József Katona.
There are lots of festivals, such as Future of Europe, Wine/Beer Festival /Folk Dance Festival.
Ellenőriznétek hogy vane benne hiba?? Még 1 mondatot bele szeretnék írni ezt:
A városházában minden egész órakor harangjátékok szólalnak meg, dísztermében a festményeket a híres magyar festő, Székely Bertalan készítette.
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