Valaki megnézné a szövegben a Past Simple és a past continuous helyességét?

Last Saturday James WAS SHOPPING in town with his friend, Rob. They WERE LOOKING for a birthday present for Rob’s sister. First they WERE GOING into a music shop, but they DIDN’T FIND anything. They DECIDED to look in the sports shop across the road. They WERE CORSSING the road when they HEARD a shout. They SAW a black car. It WAS COMING down the road. No one WAS DRIVING it! It WASN’T GOING very quickly. A man WAS RUNNING behind the car and he WAS SHORUTING. While he WAS RUNNING he FELL! James and Rob WAS RUNNING up to the car and James OPENED the door. Rob JUMPED in. It WAS very dangerous, because the car WAS MOVING. But Rob STOPPED the car.

Azt hiszem mindet kijelöltem. Előre is köszönöm! :)