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Angol panaszlevél. Mi a véleményetek róla?

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Kocsival járok munkahelyre informatikusként, de az utóbbi időben nagyon zsúfolt a parkoló és 20-30 percet is igénybe vehet a parkolás Panaszkodni kell a főnöknek: időigényes folyamat mire találok üres parkoló helyet, elkések a munkából és a felettesem levonja a fizetésemből a késési időt.

Dear John Smith,

I am writing to complain about the parking places.

I have been working as an Informatics technician in Budapest since 2009. I live far away from my workplace so I go to work by car every day instead of public transport. I have always found parking places so far, but it is very time consuming process the last few weeks. It can be 20-30 minutes. I think it causes the new supermarket what opened the last month. Nowadays when I arrive at workplace, the parking places are crowded. I have to commute around workplace what I find a parking space. Sometimes it is usually far away from the workplace. Therefore I always late for work, that my superior is not tolerated. My superior deduct from my salary due to the delay time.

I look forward to your early reply and expect you to take some action immediately.

Yours sincerely,

2013. máj. 20. 15:12

1/4 ChrisM

válasza:

Belejavítottam néhány helyen (de ne csak a nagybetűs részt nézd, mert ezt-azt ki is húztam).

Dear John Smith,

I am writing to complain about the parking places.

I have been working as an Informatics technician in Budapest since 2009. I live far away from my workplace so I go to work by car every day instead of public transport. I always found parking places so far, but it HAS BECOME A very time consuming process IN the last few weeks. It can TAKE 20-30 minutes. I think it IS causeD BY the new supermarket what WAS opened last month. Nowadays when I arrive at MY workplace, the parking LOT IS crowded. I have to commute A LOT around THE BUILDING UNTIL I CAN PARK MY CAR. Sometimes I CAN ONLY FIND A PLACE THAT IS far away from the workplace. Therefore I AM always late for work WHICH is not tolerated BY MY SUPERIOR ANYMORE. HE STARTED TO deduct THE DELAY TIMES from my salary.

I look forward to your early reply and expect you to take some action immediately.

Yours sincerely,

2013. máj. 22. 12:49

Hasznos számodra ez a válasz?

2/4 A kérdező kommentje:

Köszi, olyan hibákat vétettem, amik szinte ott vannak az orrom előtt...

2013. máj. 22. 13:14

3/4 A kérdező kommentje:

Ha nem nagy kérés, rápillantanál erre a levelemre is?

Katowicébe szeretném a mérőműszereket gyártó cégement kiterjeszteni a következők figyelmbe vételével: miért akarom pont katowicébe építtetni a gyárat, milyen gyártás fog zajlani, milyen munkákat fog biztosítani, milyen munka körülményeket fog biztosítani.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with regard to our investment intentions.

Our company has been dealing with measuring instruments producing since 1970 and I would like to expand our manufacturing to your country. Our company has a good reputation in Europe. We think your country has good investment possibilities so we would like to get a new plant built in Katowice. The component of the measuring instruments will produce in the new manufacture. It will provide 600 new jobs for the unemployment people. We will offer several jobs in the new plant, for instance HR assistant, IT specialist and assembly line worker. Moreover, we ensure pleasing work conditions in the new manufacture. The workers will get 10 minutes break in every hour, furthermore they will get one hour launch break.

I look forward to your early reply and I hope I will get positive respond from you related to our investments.

Yours faithfully,

2013. máj. 22. 13:21

4/4 ChrisM

válasza:

Fú, nem tudom, aktuális-e még, nem nagyon volt időm erre járni mostanában:

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with REGARDS to our investment intentions.

Our company has been dealing with measuring instruments producing since 1970 and I would like to expand our manufacturing to your country. Our company has a good reputation in Europe. We think your country has good investment possibilities so we would like to get a new plant built in Katowice. The component of the measuring instruments will BE PRODUCED in the new manufacture. It will provide 600 new jobs FOR UNEMPLOYED people. We will offer several jobs in the new plant, for instance HR assistant, IT specialist and assembly line worker. Moreover, we ensure pleasing WORKING conditions in the new manufacture. The workers will get A 10 minutes break in every hour, furthermore they will get A one hour launch break.

I look forward to your early reply and I hope I will get A positive RESPONSE from you related to our investments.

Yours faithfully,

2013. jún. 2. 00:39