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Tegnap vettem egy mobilt, de problémák vannak vele: nem jó a beépített kamera, nem jó a menu(nem jelenik meg) és gondok vannak a telefon számok mentésével is.

Dear Mr. John Smith,

I am writing to complain about my new mobile phone.

I bought a Samsung mobile phone from your supplier but some functions does not work. The nature photography is one of my favorite hobbies therefore I bought this mobile phone due to the high resolution built-in camera. If I launch the camera application, the screen will be black and I cannot take a picture. I think there is a hardware problem with the mobile phone. Moreover, I have got a problem about the menu of the mobile phone, because when I push the menu button, the menu is not appeared on the display and the phone restarts itself. Furthermore, I am dissatisfied about the phone number saving, because the phone save the phone number in bad format so I cannot call nobody from the phone book. Could you repair or replace the mobile phone? Since I bought it yesterday and the 3 day exchange guarantee is still valid therefore I would be grateful if you could send me a replacement.

I am very disappointed and except you to take some action immediately. I look forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

XY