Van ebben a szövegben hiba? Angol

I was working on family occasions, like birthdays, weddings as a waitress. I was doing the inventory, we had to count all items on shelves. I want to work at camp in the kitchen, because I like cooking.

Now I am studying economics at XY University in XY. After leaving school I want to study bookkeeping and I want to work.

In my free time I like reading books. My favourite is Gone with the wind from Margaret Mitchel. I like watching movies, serials. I like playing with my dog. I like traveling.

Sometimes my neighbours ask me to take care of their children. We are playing with dolls, I read them stories.

I was on a trip with my family. Once in Greece, once in Croatia. We were there for a week. I missed home, but the week went very fast. Every year we go to short trips in Hungary, we visit Budapest, Balaton, Sopron.

I am proud of my family.

My positive talents include being hard working, working well with others, friendly and ambitious. My negative talents include studying late for exams, stressing at school, being a neat freak, being too sensitive when I am watching Titanic. I want to finish the university, and I want to study bookkeeping or low (mi ez a low? Mit akarsz tanulni?), I want to find a good job, I want to have family, children.

all OF THE items on THE shelves

a sorozat meg nem serials, hanem series

nem We were there, hanem we have been there

nem we go to short trips, hanem we go on short trips

I have many positive QUALITIES like being hard, cooperating well with the others, BEING friendly and ambitious.

Bocs közben már marha álmos vagyok, a negatív tulajdonságok sincsenek épp a legjobban megfogalmazva. Hozzátenném az első jó nagyon baromságokat írt néhol és az övét javítottam.

Because

I missed home, but the week went by very fast.

I am proud of my family.

As for bad side: I start to study late for exams, sometimes I stress at school, I am a neat freak, I am being sensitive while watching Titanic, it's hard for me to forgive. (asszem az első talán még jobban leírta ezt a részt, már nem emlékszem:)

I want to finish university and study bookkeeping or law (ha jogra gondolsz).

De már biztos nem is kell, no nem baj.

Nem irtam marhasagokat, mindossze kinyitottam a szoveget angol nyelvu word-ben es a helyesirasi hibakat kijavitottam, a fogalmazasba nagyon nem is mentem bele.

Ja, es we play with dolls (mert altalanossagban beszelsz es nem eppen most), es igen, a go ON short trips-et beneztem :)

Ja, és: Now I study economics at XY Un...

Ez kimaradt.