Angol házim, hogy fogalmazást írjunk. Megírtam már, szerintetek így jó? Ha van benn valami súlyosabb hiba javítatok?

I AM GOING TO write about my best friend. My best friend is Réka. We met in the shool in class one. We didnt’t speak a lot TO each other when we were little. We began talkING in class 5. Now, we are inseparable. She has got long, crimp brown hair and brown eyes. She likes dogs and rabbits. She has got a dog and A rabbit. She has got a brother. His name is Marci. She lives in Szombathely with her parents. I LIKE her, because she is reliable, understanding and kind. We DO everything together. Last summer, we went to Italy. It was a great holiday with her. I hope we are going to be friends forever.

Szerintem súlyos hiba ebben nincs.

ügyes vagy, elfogadnék ilyen tanítványokat :)

nem hiba, inkább csak stilisztikai kekeckedés - én nem ismételném a "best friend"-et

I am going to write about my best friend. Her name is Réka.

:)