Fogalmazást kellett írni angulul a következő témáról :The places what I want to see before I die Sok hiba van benne?
The places what I want to see before I die
Unfortunately I couldn’t choose one favourite place, because I haven’t got just one. My favourite country is The USA. So I will tell you my three preferred cities. I have one in the East side, and two in the west side of the country.
The first is New York. Why New York? Because I love the skyscrapers and the crowded streets. I really want to see the Statue of the Liberty, and the Rockefeller Centre, and the Times Square. My neighbour lived in Manhattan a few years ago, and she told me loads of good things about the city (the cultural life, shopping centres, buildings what I need to see).
My next city is Los Angeles in the West side. I am in love with this City because the temperature is always hot, and if you are lucky enough you can meet famous people. I really want to see the Hollywood sign, the Kodak Theatre (the home of the Oscar Ceremonies) and the Walk of Fame.
My other choice in the west side is Las Vegas. In Las Vegas you can win and loose lots of money very-very quickly, but you need to be older than 21. Las Vegas is famous for the number of casino resorts and associated entertainment. And if you want you can make a marriage very easily and quickly.
So these three cities are my favourite. Hopefully when I will go to America I can go and see them.
válasza:
válasza:Unfortunately I couldn’t choose one favourite place, because I haven’t got only one. My favourite country is The USA. So I am going to tell you my three faovurite cities. I have one in the East side, and two in the west side of the country.
The first is New York. Why New York is it? Because I love the skyscrapers and the crowded streets. I really want to see the Statue of the Liberty, and the Rockefeller Centre, and the Times Square. My neighbour lived in Manhattan a few years ago, and she told me loads of good things about the city (the cultural life, shopping centres, buildings what I need to see).
The next city is Los Angeles in the West side. I am in love with this City because the temperature is always hot, and if you are lucky enough you may meet famous people. I really want to see the Hollywood sign, the Kodak Theatre (the home of the Oscar Ceremonies) and the Walk of Fame.
My other choice in the west side is Las Vegas. In Las Vegas you can win and loose lots of money very-very quickly, but you need to be older than 21. Las Vegas is famous for the number of casino resorts and associated entertainment. And if you want you can make a marriage very easily and quickly.
So these three cities are my favourites. Hopefully when I will go to America I will go and see them.
válasza:Na jó, tegyük rendbe!
The places i want to see before I die. (akkor használjuk a WHAT-ot, ha az a szó, amire vontakozik nincs benne a mondatban: I have what you don't. = Nekem van olyanom, ami neked nincs. Ugye nem tudod, hogy itt a what mire vontakozik.)
Unfortunately után vessző van.
So I will tell you about my ...
on the east side, on the west side
the Statue of Liberty
Rockefeller Center (britül centre)
she told me lots of ...
buildings I need to see (what nem kell, lásd fent. és semmi gond a need to kifejezéssel, bár ha egy belső kényszert szeretnél jelezni, hogy annyira vágysz rá, akkor buildings I must see)
LA on the west side
on the west side is L V
you can win and lose (a loose egy melléknév és azt jelenti, hogy laza, bő)
you can get married very easily
Hopefully when I go to America... (when után alárendelő mellékmondatban nem állhat jövő idő. Mikor van when után mellékmondat? Amikor a when-t amikornak fordítjuk. Ilyenkor elég a jelen idő és ettől még vonatkozhat a jövőre.)
Az eltés kolléga angoltudását megkérdőjelezném...
válasza: válasza:Kösz! Én voltam a 14.14-es hozzászóló.
Még annyival egészíteném ki, hogy inkább east / west coast-ot használnak keleti / nyugati part kifejezésre.
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