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Ez volt a feladat:

You are going to spend a weekend in London and you have just received an email from your British friend Robert, offering to pick you up at the airport and to take you to two of the following places during your stay:

Portobello Road Market

Portobello Road plays host to one of London's largest and most interesting street markets, which really springs into life on a Saturday. No

visit to London would be complete without spending a day here.

Abbey Road

Walk this historic street in London and you are transported back to the turbulent era of the 1960s and the musical phenomenon of the Beatles.

Royal Observatory Greenwich

The prime meridian, zero degrees longitude, runs through the courtyard of the Royal Observatory in Greenwich, near London, which was

founded in 1675 by King Charles II.

British Library

Divided into public and members-only areas, this superb library includes three exhibition galleries featuring the Illuminated Manuscripts display,

original Shakespeare folios and the Gutenburg Bible.

Write an email of 120-150 words to Robert in which you include the following:

tell him when your flight arrives;

choose the two places you would like to see and give your reasons;

mention one or two other things you would like to do in London.

És ezt írtam:

Hi, Róbert,

Thank you for your letter. The plane will arrive on Saturday at Heathrow Airport. About eight o'clock in the morning will land the airplane. Thank you for a short briefing of the London sights. All seems very exciting. I would be very happy if you could see the market. I want to buy something for my parents and my brother. I always been interested for art, because I want to visit the library. I know that there is no time for everything, but I would like to see most of the exhibitions at the library. I heard that is great, and there is many sights. I would like to walk a lot in London and acquainted with local people.

Yours sincerely