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My name is xy.

I live in xy.

I was born in 1996.

I am 15 years old.

I am a tenth former. I belong to class A.

I attend xy.

English is my first foreign language.

I have learnt english for seven years.

My second foreign language is Italian.I prefer Italian to English because

I think the Italian language is much more beatutiful than the English but the English is more important.

My favourite subjects at school are History and Italian. I hate the Matematics and the Chemistry.

I am an only child. I enjoy it. I wouldn't like to have a sister or brother because maybe I am too selfish that let me share my things with somebody. I like playing computer games, watching tv, I like the horror films. I like listening to music, My favorite music styles are pop, dance and rock music. And I hate the classical music.

I very like the animals, except the cats and the insects I have 3 dogs and I very like playing with them. And I have two snakes. They are very nice and friendly. I like swimming, ride and the cars,

I like the motorsports my favorite is the Formula One. I was a Formula One racing at summer. I really enjoyed it. The cars were very loud and fast. This was a very good experience for me at summer.