Valaki tud segíteni átnézni ezt a rövid bemutatkozást h hol vannak benne nyelvtani hibák?

"I was a Formula One racing at summer."

Ebben a mondatban valami kimaradt, nézd át!

"AND"-del nem igazán illendő mondatot kezdeni.

Miért kezded a tárgyakat nagybetűvel. English nagy E. Mathematics. Mathematics és Chemistry előtt nem írnék névelőt.

...too selfish to share my things.

horror films előtt nincs the

classical music előtt nincs the

I like animals very much VAGY I love animals

excepting cats and insects

riding and cars

motorsports előtt nincs the

brit angolban favourite

I was at... in summer

I prefer Italian language more than English.

nem kell névelő a tantárgyak elé

nincs the horror films, többes szám elé nem mehet névelő!!!!

I like so mach animals, cats elé megint nem kell the

im a sophomore - es nem im a 10th former. amugyis inkabb grader

english is the first foreign language i learn

my favorite classes are history & italian.

ezt a very-t mar elmondtak szerintem meg azt a sok the hibat is.

ride helyett riding

a tobbit mondtak

i would have to share my things with somebody, which i wouldnt like, resulting from being selfish.

Na nekiszaladok az egésznek úgy ahogy van:

My name is xy.

I live in xy.

I was born in 1996.

I am 15 years old.

I am a tenth former. <--- esküszöm, képtelen vagyok értelmezni ezt a mondatot, szerintem valamit félreérthettél órán.

I belong to class A.

I attend xy.

English is my first foreign language.

I have learnt english for seven years.

My second foreign language is Italian. I prefer Italian to English because I think that Italian is much more beautiful than English but English is more important.

My favourite subjects at school are History and Italian. I hate Mathematics (vagy simán csak Maths) and Chemistry.

I am an only child. I enjoy it. I wouldn't like to have a sister or brother because maybe I am too selfish to share my things (with somebody). I like playing computer games, watching tv, I like horror films (VAGY ...watching tv, especially horror films). I like listening to music, my favourite music genres (zenei stílusokra a "genre(s)" szót használjuk a style(s) helyett) are pop, dance and rock music, and I hate classical music.

I like animals very much (VAGY I love animals), except for cats and insects. I have three dogs and I love to play with them. I also have two snakes, they are very nice and friendly. I like swimming, riding and cars.

I like motorsports too, my favourite one is Formula One (VAGY ...my favourite motorsport is Formula One).

I was a Formula One racing at summer. --> ha egy F1 versenyen voltál, akkor: I have been to a Formula One race this summer.

I really enjoyed it. The cars were very loud and fast. This was a very good experience for me.

Remélem, segítettem! Ha valamit nem értesz, vagy van még kérdésed, írj nyugodtan, még itt vagyok egy ideig :)

Tessa