Angol fordításhoz segítség kellene, (felpontozok)?

"I hope that despite this little problem we can meet this week. Which day would be the most convenient for you? It would be very kind from you if you could give me a chance, it is very hard to find a family who accepts someone without a drivers license and fluent english. How many days and hours will I have to work in a week? If I don't understand something I ask, not pretend to understand just to make me look better. I cannot drive, but if there is a park near, I could walk the kids there, it's healthier than the car and they won't become couch potatoes. In Europe, we don't usually go everywhere by car, most of the kids go to their school on foot or with public transportation. They don't expect their parents to take them everywhere."

Nem akarok kötözködni, de ha ilyen munkát akarsz elvállalni, akkor ilyen szövegeket már simán kéne tudnod fordítani...

Ezt én így fordítottam le. Ha esetleg hiba van benne, szívesen veszem, ha rámutatnak. Köszönöm. (Úgy fordítottam le, hogy nem néztem meg a fordítást, csak miután lefordítottam, még kezdő angolosnak számítok, ez remek alkalom számomra, hogy fordítsak és esetleg valaki rámutasson, hogy miben hibáztam :)

I hope that in spite of this small mistake, we can meet this week. Which day or date would be the most suitable to meet? I would like to give an opportunity of you. It’s difficult to find such a family, who don’t care of somebody can drive and speak perfect English or not. How many days and hours would be worked a week? If I don’t understand something I always ask it. I don’t pretend something seemed to be understood if I don’t, just in order that I look smarter. I can’t drive, but if there is a park near here I can take the children on foot as well there. Walking is much healthier than going by car and They won’t be lazy. In Europe people don’t use car everytime they go somewhere and don’t take the children by it. The most of the children go to school on foot or by public transport and parents don’t be expected to tooling them everywhere.

Thank you

Uh... hát nem akarlak elkeseríteni, de elég sok a hiba benne... csak az egyiket emelem ki:

"I would like to give an opportunity of you"

Na ez kb. ezt jelenti:

"Szeretnék adni egy lehetőséget tőled"

A kérdező nyilván _kapni_ -t írt. Hány éve tanulsz angolt?

Amúgy most veszem észre, hogy én is hibáztam a fordítás során:

Drivers license HELYETT driver's license... IJ ;)

who don’t care of

would be worked a week

something seemed to be understood ->ez kissé 'angoltalan' fogalmazás

near here -> near there, mert nem a munkavállalás helyén vagyunk jelenleg

The most of the children ->nem kell a 'the'

don’t be expected to tooling -> nyelvtanilag teljesen rossz, a 'tool' pedig szerszámot jelent

Kb. ezek a rosszak.