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Milyen hibák vannak ebben a szövegben?

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I was planning to meet her at noon.

But I woke up late, because I had gone to sleep so late.

It’s still raining now

When I checked my phone, a message had already been sent from her.

“Hey, are you awake?” and “ Call me! “

so, I called her “ I’m sorry, I have just woken up.”

She told me “ What!? Have you forgotten? We have to meet! Please,Hurry up!”

We met at three o’clock. Then we went to Mario Shopping Center for her boyfriend’s gift.

Finally, she got a few clothes. It looks nice.

We came back to our city.

And we went to the café for drinking a cup of coffee.

We talked about going to Australia never ending story.

And I was home at 8 o’clock.

Today is funny, but I think it would have been better if it hadn't rained

Anyway, That’s all!


2011. ápr. 30. 14:28
 1/1 anonim ***** válasza:

Nem tudom, hogy melyik kulon es melyik egy mondat. But es and-del nem kezdunk mondatokat, igy atirom egy kicsit.


I was planning to meet her at noon, but went to sleep very late last night and woke up too late in the morning.

It is still raining.

When I checked my phone, a message has already arrived from her.

“Hey, are you awake?” and “ Call me! “

I did call and told her “ I’m sorry, I have just woken up.”

She said, “ What!? Have you forgotten? We were supposed to meet! Please hurry up!”

We've managed to meet at three o’clock. Then we went to Mario's Shopping Centre (igy jobban hangzik a vasarlokozpont neve) to buy some gifts for her boyfriend.

Finally, she got a few clothes. They look nice.

Later we came back to the city.

We stopped at a café to have some coffee.

We talked about going to Australia, oh, the never ending story.

I was home by 8 o’clock.

The day was fun, but it would have been better if it hadn't rained.

Anyway, this is all!

2011. ápr. 30. 16:01
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