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Dear Lisa

Thanks for your email.

It's great that you are planning to visit us next month.

In 5 years time you will be finishing the university.

I know you study to much and you bot enough time.

We might be going for a cirkus,but i don't know that the cirkus will open,if the weather be bad.

In the cirkus we are going to see the seal show and we are going to eat a pizza.

And every day we are going to the beache and we might be seeing some delphine.

We will be going to fishing .After we get back i'll be working in my mom cafè for a days over Easter.

And 5 minute ago i spoke my friends and we're going bowling .I hope you may be going with me .

You could visit any time during the last week of holiday.

Because I will be going to the holiday with my family.

And when you get my email you will call me .

I'd be happy if you should say when will you come .I hope you write me soom