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I was looking forward to the start of the winter holiday since this semester begun. And it was up to my expectations! Let me tell you in a few words about my experiences. I spent most of my time with my family. The first important moment of my winter holiday was the Holy Night. I was at home with my parents, i got some gifts and we had good food together. It was very peaceful, I enjoyed it very much. The other two days of Christmas were spent with the other family members, it was good to see my cousins again, we had a good time together. Between the two holidays I met some of my friends, one day we went skating, the other day we saw New Year's Eve movie in cinema, I liked it very much, so I decided to spend New Years's Eve one day in New York...but this year I wasnt this lucky, but the anyway I had a good party with my friends. The last day I did my homework and prepared for school a little bit. In conclusion I had a great time during the winter holiday, and now I can't wait for the summer holiday to come!

Nem tudom hányadikos vagy és milyen suliba jársz, remélem sikerült eltalálnom a színvonalat. És nem számoltam meg, hogy hány mondat, de szerintem ennyi elég kell legyen a tanárnak. :D