Angol fogalmazás, találtok benne nyeltani hibákat?

I have a lot of free time.

I currently have two hobbies.

They are football and computer games.

I play football for fun, but do not enter competitions.

I usually play tennis twice a week.

My favourite hobbies are computer games.

My favourite games are Portal 2 and Witcher 2.

I like to watch TV.

My favourite series is "Lie to Me".

I spend my free time with my friends.

I like to go to the cinema.

I like action, comedy and horror films.

I go to the cinema once a week.

I hardly ever read a book.

I go to the dentist once a year.

I often listen to music.

I go to the hairdresser once a month.

My two hobbies are important to me because they help me relax from too much sudying.

Habar utolso mondat nem valami ertelmes, mivel ugy kezdted, hogy nagyon sok szabad idod van, akkor mikor tanulsz "tul sokat"?

Konyvet alig olvasol, akkor hogy, mibol tanulsz?

I play football for fun,do not go competitions. - inkább i don't take part in competitions.

My favorite hobbies are computer games. - nem kell a hobby-t többes számba tenni.

I like go to the cinema. - 'like going'

I like it the action, comedy and horror films. - az 'it' és a 'the' felesleges.

My two hobbies are important to me because they help me relax from studying too much. - ...important for me because they help me relax after studying too much.

I don't go TO competitions.

És szerintem ezekben az esetekben az I like után -ing-es alak jobb lenne.

I like action, comedy and horror films. (it - nem kell)

Utolsó mondat szerintem after és nem from.

De nem volt időm elmélyedni benne, így hirtelen ezeket gondolom. :)

go to competitions

I like watching TV.

I like going to the cinema.

I like action, comedy and horror films.

"relax from studying" ezt nem egészen értem

A brit angolban "favourite".

Másfél hónap alatt szuper.