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My winter holiday was very good. I was ill in the first 2 days, so this was a little bit wrong. In the winter vacation we bought many Christmas gifts with my mother. Visited many people to us and we received many gift from my relatives. I have slept a long time in the every morning. The Christmas and New Year's Eve also was very good. I was started learning for the school in 2012. Would have a been good yet a little to rest. This was my winter holiday.

Remélem tudtam segíteni, a szembe tűnő hibákat kijavítottam :)

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I had a really great time on my winter holiday. Unfortunately the first 2 days started a little bit badly.

We bought the Christmas gifts together with my mother.

Many visitors came. We have given gifts to family members.