Írtam egy angol dalszöveget. Milyen lett?
Please love me
Please kiss me
Please be with me!
Please hug me
Please want me
Please look at me!
I love you
I kiss you
I am with you
I hug you
I want you
I look at you
We love
We kiss
We hug
A kis, a hug can change the world!
Amit te írtál az nem nevezhető dalszövegnek.
Hoztam egy példát az Arctic Monkeys-tól hogy milyen egy értelmes dalszöveg.(igaz ez már elég nehéz nyelvezetű)
"The Jeweller's Hands"
Fiendish wonder in the carnival's wake
Dull caresses once again irritate
Tread softly stranger
Move over toward the danger that you seek
You think excitement has receded then the mirror distracts
The logic of the trance quickly reaches and grasps
Handsome and faceless and weightless your imagination runs
And now it's no ones fault but yours
At the foot of the house of cards
You thought you'd never get obsessed
You thought the wolves would be impressed
And you're a sinking stone
But you know what it's like to hold the jeweller's hands
That procession of pioneers all drowned
In the moonlight they're more thrilling those things that he knows
As he leads you through the grinning bubble blowers in the snow
Watching his exit was like falling off the ferry in the night
The inevitables gather to push you around
Any other voice makes such a punishing sound
It became laughter's assassin shortly after he showed you what it was
And now it's no ones fault but yours, at the foot of the house of cards
You thought you'd never get obsessed
You thought the wolves would be impressed
And you're a sinking stone
But you know what it's like to hold the jeweller's hands
That procession of pioneers all drowned
If you've a lesson to teach me I'm listening, ready to learn
There's no one here to police me I'm sinking in until the return
If you've a lesson to teach please don't deviate, don't be afraid
Without the last corner piece I can't calibrate, let's get it engraved
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