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Esetleg még ha tudjátok picit egyszerűsíteni annak is örülnék :)

One of my favourite films of all time is `The Matrix`. It`s an action-packed film.

The Matrix is a 1999 American-Australian written and directed by The Wachowskis

The film is a science fiction thriller, which has a very complicated storyline.

It stars Keanu Reeves who plays a computer expert called Neo.

Neo finds out that his world has been taken over by intelligent machines, which they use to control people`s minds.

Neo and two other rebels (called Morpheus and Trinity) set out to try to destroy the matrix.

What I like most about the film is the photography and the special effects, using CGI technology.

The film is using a visual effect known as bullet time.

The bullet time effect known as slow motion.

These are really amazing and make it look like a computer game. It`s a gripping film indeed.

I like the science fiction films, so i enjoyed the film very much.

I can only recommend