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Dear Editor,

Iam writting to conplain about the lot of homeless people in the city. They are in miserable situation and they are bring down the cityscape.

If i walk to in the main street ot go to shopping or church I pick up the homeless people beg for money in front of the shops or church.

In my openion the local goverment responsibility that help the homeless people. These people should need a place where they sleep and make a shower. Furthermore should share more food.