Valaki le ellenőrizné ezt a fordítást?

Stilisztikailag nem javítom, csak az ordas hibákat.

In 2030 I will be 32 years old. First of all I would like to study in a university and I hope I will study law or economics. After that I would like to have a good job for example: lawyer, economist or tourist guide, but I prefer tourist guide, because that is my dream job and I love to travel and speak with people. I will have a big family with 2 children and a husband and I hope we will have a big house with a big garden. And I think many things will change in 2030 : the environment, jobs, houses , cars... but I think they will better. In my opinion the technology will be more modern. I hope my life will be really good in 2030.

In 2030 I will BE 32 years old. First of all i would like to study AT a university and iI WANT study law or economics. After that i'd like TO HAVE a good job for example: lawyer,economist or tourist guide , but i prefer tourist guide , because thats my dream job and i love TO travel and speak with people. I ALSO WANT TO have a big family with 2 children and a husband and i hope we will have a big house with a big garden And I think many things will change TILL 2030 : The environment,jobs, house ,cars...but i think they will BE better. In my opinion the technology will BE more modern . I hope my life will be really good in 2030.

A javításokat nagybetűkkel beleírtam, de a szöveg így se tökéletes - bár egy kezdőnél szerintem elmegy már

Még valami:

study at a university

Nem "le ellenőriz", hanem "leellenőriz" De ezt a szót igekötővel nem használja a magyar!!!!!!!! Csak egyszerűen: "ellenőriz" Ami pedig a szöveget illeti, siralmasnak mondanám!

Üdv.: Juanito Rico

In 2030 I will be 32 years old.

My plan is to study at university, preferably law or economics. On completion of my studies, I would like to gain a good job, for example: lawyer, economist or even a tour guide. I would prefer to become a tour guide, as I love to travel and to meet and talk to people. This would be my dream job.

I hope to have a family. (2 gyerek az nem szamit nagy csaladnak)

A husband, two children, a big house with a large garden.

I do believe many things will change by 2030, the environment, jobs and workplaces, housing, transport and motor vehicles. I do think changes will be for the better. In my opinion the technology will be even more advanced.

I hope my life will be enjoyable and successful in 2030.